Ebola Virus
Ebola virus is one of serious issue that took a huge place in the
world . In the article 'Window to Stop Ebola Outbreak is 'ClosingQuickly,' Official Warns Alexandra Sifferlin. Has argued about spreading
Epidemic from west Africa and still increase because they prevent the contact
and provide them necessary supplies to these countries. “Getting supplies and
people in is a big challenge,” as result of that challenge . Ebola will still to spread near neighboring
areas then expanded to include more countries and more it become difficult to
handle. The discovery of the causes of the disease and work to eliminate will be helping in reducing the number of infected cases. Also, Union countries to find best ways in
fighting and controlling virs is important for the world as whole it's not just for west Africa’s countries.
You have great ideas and have integrated the source into your response well. Some of your structure inhibits understanding, however. For example, combine the second and third sentences because they are both dependent clauses. But more importantly, in the third sentence when you state "they prevent the contact," who are you referring to and how does that support the claim that the virus is still spreading?
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